Well I have just read the prologue when I wanted to wait until it was finished :P. Ill start reading it all now, i bet I will be angry at my decision in 5 days time.
@Bumble: What do you think about me doing the editing? Like your full stops and capitalizations are somewhat off at times. I can do that and then make it into a PDF and even try to make a book cover so that we can post it on our website and say that it is your awesome work. What do you think?
Edit: Just finished chapter three, you made me sick with that paragraph of the killing man! I envisioned it all. ._.
Edit 2: Holy shit dude, chapter 4 is some messed up shit. Especially Rilo. I wonder how Joke will feel after reading that, i felt honestly bad. Why portray Rilo like that XD. Also can you make me have a katana (since my ping on all servers is 300 - 500 xd) and a g36?
YOU CAN WRITE!
Edit 3: I began creating a nicer copy for a PDF that I will add to every time you write because I was bored. Here is something I saw.