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:{Per}: !TopFox
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!TopFox
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Great job!
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning how to dance in the rain.
:{Per}: BumbleBee
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UPDATE:

Chapter 3 is now posted.
Rilos history against Puuce is revealed.
Enjoy this long chapter, Im sure the others wont be so long, but
I'll try make as much mess as possible. =3.

Thank you all for your patience and comments.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
:{Per}: Puuce
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Puuce
wow, these rilo's secrets, damn that was awesome :D
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:{Per}: WarLord
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WarLord
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I have decided to read everything when it is done xd i hate waiting time .-. like when you read the last book in the series and in 1/2 year the next book shall come.
:{Per}: Rilo
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Rilo
Lmao,, ikr, he takes too long to continue with the story
Zas, en toda la boca. Bazingaa!! The more you know who you are, And what you want. The less you let things upset you.
:{Per}: WarLord
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@bumblebee: dont hurry it because of us. Make it the best possible. Ill read it at the end, i love reading stuff.
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I'm not speeding because rilo says so.. I type it when it pops in my head, otherwise I will forget it.. This next chapter might take abit of time.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
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After some timeouts, and rage from stupid spam words.. For example the word (W a t c h / W a t c h i n g)

Chapter 4 is finally upon us.
Next one will be even better, more blood and demonic killings ahead =D.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
:{Per}: WarLord
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WarLord
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Well I have just read the prologue when I wanted to wait until it was finished :P. Ill start reading it all now, i bet I will be angry at my decision in 5 days time.

@Bumble: What do you think about me doing the editing? Like your full stops and capitalizations are somewhat off at times. I can do that and then make it into a PDF and even try to make a book cover so that we can post it on our website and say that it is your awesome work. What do you think?

Edit: Just finished chapter three, you made me sick with that paragraph of the killing man! I envisioned it all. ._.

Edit 2: Holy shit dude, chapter 4 is some messed up shit. Especially Rilo. I wonder how Joke will feel after reading that, i felt honestly bad. Why portray Rilo like that XD. Also can you make me have a katana (since my ping on all servers is 300 - 500 xd) and a g36?

YOU CAN WRITE!

Edit 3: I began creating a nicer copy for a PDF that I will add to every time you write because I was bored. Here is something I saw.

:{Per}: Genesis
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Genesis
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I love this story :3 Keep writing such good stuff :D
"Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see a shadow."
- Helen Keller
:{Per}: BumbleBee
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Well, I write the first thing in my head, I didnt plan to let joke be killed First, Let me tell you that there is a twist =P, you will see joke again. Just like a few others. Only a couple.

Most of the time I forget about my punctuation, so be my guest about correcting them, also any spelling mistakes, you happen to come across.

As for the killings well, I kinda experimented with Chapter4, the other chapters, well, let's not go there lol.

As for portraying Rilo, like that? Easy answer, every book or story, needs a character, thats jealous of the main, it'll continue until a later time.

Samurai/Katana is already taken by some one else, you won't find out until later. Your weapons however are unique to your particular talent.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
:{Per}: Rilo
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War,, my character is awesome so fck off xD also im helping him a bit too
Zas, en toda la boca. Bazingaa!! The more you know who you are, And what you want. The less you let things upset you.
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BumbleBee
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Bullshit Rilo Xd, your helping by just simply pushing me to do another chapter, asshole xd, I got afew ideas for the next.
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:{Per}: Joke
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Daamn you spoiled me ^^
I planned to read it at the end :'(
:{Per}: !TopFox
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!TopFox
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Ye, me too!
Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning how to dance in the rain.
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BumbleBee
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^.^ soon, Rilo gets whats coming =D, then a mega twist yet again lmao.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
:{Per}: Rilo
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Rilo
Lool, bullshit im not pushing u, im helping u
Zas, en toda la boca. Bazingaa!! The more you know who you are, And what you want. The less you let things upset you.
:{Per}: Puuce
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Puuce
i love it!
cant wait for the next chapter, I hope it'll take less time than the third :x
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:{Per}: WarLord
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@BumbleBee & @Vega: Are you fine with this being published on our website? Im planning on making a book cover and stuff. With a legal and stuff.
:{Per}: BumbleBee
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Why Vega? Lol, I dont mind it being publicised, other wise I wouldn't have started to post here lmao. I think I have like another 6-7 chapters left? I dunno.
The British are coming, sooner than you think we are.
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