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:{Per}: !TopFox
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!TopFox
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Because Vega needs to agree to post it on the website, I think =)
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:{Per}: WarLord
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WarLord
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That is correct Top.
:{Per}: sh1omi
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sh1omi
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I dont think that it should be on the menu on our website, but I could add page for the story with nice animation(example: http://tympanus.net/Tutorials/FullscreenBookBlock/).
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:{Per}: WarLord
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WarLord
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Ahh, seems nice sh1omi. Good idea.
:{Per}: BumbleBee
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BumbleBee
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Chapter 5 is complete,
Sorry for the wait. Im
also hoping Chapter 6
will be done in about 2weeks
ish time.

So wait and hope you enjoy this exciting new chapter =).

Special thanks, to Puuce and Rilo for
stubborn people and force me to write this ;), jks.
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:{Per}: R3V1S0R
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R3V1S0R
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aaaaaaaand i'm dead -.-
well a nice end for me at least :)
thx Pho^^
:{Per}: Nightmare
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Nightmare
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Not bad bumble, not bad. I liked it, but u have some mistakes (i know i m a freaking romanian who lives in england and it s ok to hate me for that but i know a few about grammar) so make sure u will correct them please. Beside that, it s good. I didn t know u can write xD. Impressive
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WarLord
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About time xd lol. Ill copy it into my document and correct it while im reading it. Thanks for the spoiler r3v.

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WarLord
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WHY PHO WHY! XD By us being bros I mean not romance I meant like best buddies xd but whatever.... this kinda shocked me when I read it lol.
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sh1omi
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warlord stop touch my butt pls lol
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BumbleBee
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Lel, dont worry R3v... You'll be alive again.... Well... Sorta hehe
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WarLord
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I am a GH0ST! ~R3V
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R3V1S0R
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Ssshhhh dont tell it to them!
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That means u don t exist:))) n1 pho

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BumbleBee
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I'm real sorry for the long wait on Chapter 6, I've been lazy for the past year or so... You all can thank Rilo, lmao.
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R3V1S0R
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nice one pho :)

I didnt know you still work on that.
:{Per}: Juriska
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Juriska
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Wow, i didnt know about thsi topic :) Glad i was able to read it! I really enjoyed it
Although i was a "little" suprised with how descriptive you were with sh1 and warlord :p but i enjoyed it !

If i can criticise a bit, i found it hard to read, like the text was too compact, maybe go to a new line more often? like during dialogs?

Will be waiting for the next chapter!
time is precious... waste it wisely
:{Per}: BumbleBee
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BumbleBee
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Thanks for the tip Juri, problem is that, I copy and paste from Word, it dosent copy it exactly as I write it, so I have to literally manually alter it...

Rilo said he'd alter it all when its finished, so that means spell check, paragraphing, punctuation... etc etc..
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